Hi Nathalie! I love the choice of the subject for your pictures! The colors are bright, especially for the second picture. In your photos, you captured different lines and shapes and chose a good angle. The pictures are sharp, the fourth and the first one particularly. Talking about the first one, I think this is my favorite. However you should have chosen a different aperture to get more light in your photo. the front part is, also, a bit blurry. I really like the patterns on the yellow part of the fourth picture. It gives a little something interesting and original to the work. It can also be your focal point, since our eye is quickly directed towards this pattern. Then, the third photo looks pretty good too! It is very sharp on the front, but less on the top of the picture. I really like the design, as well as the lines that are pretty varied. Plus, I like the lighting that reflects on it. The last one is maybe my least favorite. It isn’t sharp enough, there isn’t much of a variation in lines or shapes, as well. Then, the background in the holes are a bit too visible, in my opinion. To conclude, your overall project is very interesting! Next time try to add more lighting to your photos, avoid the blurry parts and distracting background that could be too visible. Keep up with the good work!
Hi Nathalie! I love the choice of the subject for your pictures! The colors are bright, especially for the second picture. In your photos, you captured different lines and shapes and chose a good angle. The pictures are sharp, the fourth and the first one particularly. Talking about the first one, I think this is my favorite. However you should have chosen a different aperture to get more light in your photo. the front part is, also, a bit blurry. I really like the patterns on the yellow part of the fourth picture. It gives a little something interesting and original to the work. It can also be your focal point, since our eye is quickly directed towards this pattern. Then, the third photo looks pretty good too! It is very sharp on the front, but less on the top of the picture. I really like the design, as well as the lines that are pretty varied. Plus, I like the lighting that reflects on it. The last one is maybe my least favorite. It isn’t sharp enough, there isn’t much of a variation in lines or shapes, as well. Then, the background in the holes are a bit too visible, in my opinion. To conclude, your overall project is very interesting! Next time try to add more lighting to your photos, avoid the blurry parts and distracting background that could be too visible. Keep up with the good work!
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